LOL. The assignment was to go and sketch whatever we wanted, but you are right - I was focusing on the slouch. His right hand is ... uh... typing! Yes, typing!
I think I will post one of my other shots from a different angle.
Even though the pose is easy to understand, I feel like there's something missing in the overall image. The left hand feels a bit too flat in my opinion and I think his back could be just little bit more straight. (Maybe like Usman said, you could try to arch his back forward).
Also, his legs are in a weird position, but maybe that's just me!
I went and slouched down on my couch. Trust me I am no slouch when it comes to slouching (sorry). But my back definitely arches in like Stu. And it even pulls my stomach in. So I am not sure how to arch his back forward.
After 15+ years in the tech industry working for companies like Apple, I left the world of being an executive for a software company and now I am going back to school to learn 3D character animation.
It is kind of like that old TV show "Green Acres" where he leaves the big city to be a farmer - but without the farm and without Eva Gabor ... ok, maybe it isn't like that much at all.
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Hey nice pose, i like it! Don't know what to do better
I assume they must'e given you a word to focus on, then to pose it appropriately. I'm thinking 'Slouch' I could be wrong.
Although I should mention that one hand is oddly positioned behind the proposed laptop. A suggestion he could be doing something he shouldn't LOL
LOL. The assignment was to go and sketch whatever we wanted, but you are right - I was focusing on the slouch. His right hand is ... uh... typing! Yes, typing!
I think I will post one of my other shots from a different angle.
lol cool dude no worries. I like the fact that they let you come up with your own ideas for the poses, which is great.
You most certainly have communicated clearly what you wanted the audience to see. You're off to a great start. Keep it up buddy!
Oh in addition to that if you're going for the slouch pose, try to arch his back forward from the chair a little more.
Nice start on the posing West!
Even though the pose is easy to understand, I feel like there's something missing in the overall image. The left hand feels a bit too flat in my opinion and I think his back could be just little bit more straight. (Maybe like Usman said, you could try to arch his back forward).
Also, his legs are in a weird position, but maybe that's just me!
Great start West! Keep it up :)
I went and slouched down on my couch. Trust me I am no slouch when it comes to slouching (sorry). But my back definitely arches in like Stu. And it even pulls my stomach in. So I am not sure how to arch his back forward.
Thanks for all of the comments.
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